floating through the air some thing didn't feel right the plane starts lowering at crazy rates then we crash into the mountain a hard hit and every thing went black. I wake up confused in a broken air plane I look out side pouring rain so I grab my umbrella and go look for help. I see a red building in the distance so I keep moving forward. I get to the building but nothing was there. So then I thought to myself instead of traveling all this way I could of just scrutinize the plane for a phone.
Lots and lots of spelling mistakes you should try and read over your own work it will help. Also the beginning sentence start with a lower case. You still have an overall awesome story.
ReplyDeleteYour story is very funny HA HA :)
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